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  • Building a World – Writing Solar Eclipse

    Three months ago, I sat down with two blank documents open side by side. On the left, a Word document titled Solar Eclipse Chapter One. On the right, a Clip Studio canvas with a blank thirteen-page spread. Same story. Same characters. Two completely different animals. I want to talk about what I have learned so far, because it has changed the way I think about storytelling entirely.

    The novel chapter opens with Bonnie alone on a rooftop, throwing cowrie shells and trying to decode a prophecy she did not ask for. In prose, I can spend two pages inside her mind. I can describe the scent of rose water on the laundry line, the way the oracle trance pulls her out of reality so completely that an hour passes in what feels like ten minutes. The reader is embedded in her consciousness, carried along by the rhythm of the sentences. That interiority is the whole engine of the chapter.

    In a panel, a character cannot think for two pages. They can look at a shell on the ground, and the reader either feels the weight of it or they do not. The drawing has to do the work that three paragraphs of interiority did in prose.

    In the manga, I cannot do any of that. I have a panel, a facial expression, and maybe a short thought bubble. The opening had to be completely restructured. Instead of starting with Bonnie’s internal world, I open with Obsidian, the spirit-cat, watching the manor from outside. It is a narrator’s eye. You see the building first, then the people inside it, then the tension. The information arrives in a different order, through different senses, and the pacing runs on silence and the gutter between panels rather than on the cadence of a sentence.

    The biggest surprise has been how much the two forms teach each other. Writing the manga forced me to sharpen the novel’s dialogue. If a line of speech does not work inside a bubble, it probably does not work in prose either. And the novel forced me to think about the manga’s emotional architecture. In the chapter, there is a scene where Arkaine and Bonnie argue. He accuses her of siding with Fenrys; she tells him to get his act together. In the prose, the tension builds through their word choices, through what they are not saying. When I adapted it into panels, I realised I needed the argument to escalate visually. The vines on the walls of his bedroom needed to respond. The green flame in the fireplace needed to flicker. The environment becomes a character.

    I do not think I would recommend this process to anyone who values their sleep. But I also would not trade it. Working across two media has made me a sharper writer and a more intentional artist. If Solar Eclipse ever reaches an audience, I want them to be able to enter through whichever door they prefer and find the same world waiting for them on the other side.

    Next month I will be talking about character design: how I built Arkaine, Bonnie, and Fenrys from shapes and flowers and stubbornness.

    — Kulsuhm

  • Solar Eclipse – Within a storm of rain and leaves

    Synopsis

    In the Lunar Sector, Duchess Bonnie and Duke Arkaine depart for Floris amid political strain
    and personal conflict, Arkaine resisting the council summons due to a longstanding and
    unresolved tension with Duke Fenrys. Bonnie, an oracle burdened by fragmented visions,
    urges him to go regardless, as her prophecies begin to intensify in urgency.

    On arrival, Floris is in decline. A sickness spreads through the districts, bodies left in the
    streets and a sense of controlled silence around the crisis. At the palace, they are given a
    single bedroom, reinforcing their suspicions that Fenrys’ hospitality is deliberate rather than
    incidental. That night, Arkaine observes Fenrys in a secret discussion with alchemists,
    suggesting something more contained and politically managed.

    During the council meeting, Fenrys reveals that Gaia, the Tree of Life, is dying, and that
    Floris is being consumed by a mana-draining plague. Tensions escalate when Arkaine’s
    curse is linked to the phenomenon, and he is publicly accused of treason. The situation
    collapses into political fracture, ending with Arkaine’s confinement as Bonnie is forced to
    step back.

    Left in uncertainty, Bonnie resolves to uncover the truth behind Floris’ decay, as Fenrys’ own
    grief hints at a deeper calamity beneath the politics.

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    A deep twilight hue painted the sky of the Lunar sector, unease rolling through the manor
    grounds, crickets chirped in the grass, and birds soared languidly through the morning air.
    Something moved behind the clouds, even with the aroma of peace.

    Something akin to a broken branch in a mist of full-leafed trees, an itch behind a dog’s ear, a
    shadow brushing against the foot of the stone steps, an undeniable foreboding, brooding
    quietly, underneath the earth.

    The air smelled damp, though there were no signs of rain, not a drop of dew on the grass
    below and beyond the Aurelius Manor’s sprawling grounds.

    The gothic manor stood at the crest of a long stone staircase, its dark facade rising in carved
    arches and tall narrow windows, the heavy oak doors set beneath an elegant archway,
    etched with the Lunar sigil of a star spearing an upturned crescent moon. Crimson roses
    climbed the walls in a tangled profusion, thorned vines and ivy curling through the window
    frames and reaching over the stone as though trying to take over the house itself.

    Clothes hung from lines strung between sturdy columns, framed by wrought-iron rails,
    glittered in the lanterns’ glow. Large blue iron lamps hung from the sides of the columns,
    washing the stone in a soft, ghostly light.

    The fabrics that hung on the line swayed, already dry and warm in the soft breeze, next to
    Bonnie, a Solar elf who married Lunar’s heir by the arrangement of the two sector rulers to
    bring alliance to their world.

    Drawn to her alone, the light reflected against the sheer and silk fabrics of her clothing.

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    She’d only wanted to grab her glittering gold shawl off the laundry line, her light pink curls
    slipping loose from their pinned style as she reached for it. Instead, she had been pulled
    under by one of those hazy spells that came without warning. The clothes on the line waved
    in the wind, droplets of water dotting the stone balcony.

    The scent of rose water, pine, and the sandalwood-and-wheat mixture the maids would use
    to wash the clothes tickled her nose, comforting and calming all at once, though it did
    nothing to thaw her mental dilemma.

    The world had loosened around the edges. She no longer knew whether she was standing
    or kneeling. The blue lantern light had gone strange, swelling and dimming, as though
    submerged underwater.

    Then came the pull.

    It always began as a pressure behind her eyes, a gathering weight at the base of her skull,
    and then the slipping. Her breath went shallow. Her limbs were heavy and her thoughts no
    longer her own. There was pressure on her mind, as if something had placed its weight on
    her head, bringing forth a series of fractured images. Roots twisting into dark water. A
    shattered crown and a repetition of words she couldn’t make out clearly.

    Once it finally receded, she stared down at the stone floor, raking through her mind. What
    could it mean? What could it be hinting at? Whatever it was, it was urgent; tomorrow was the
    eleventh of the new calendar month, the Summer cycle just beginning. The solstice is
    always prime time for a significant prophetic message.

    She blinked, trying to clear the cloudiness of her mind, pulling herself away from the airy
    consciousness she usually fell into during times like this. Since she was young, the haunting

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    of the oracle had claimed her. Sweeping her into a pathline that only she could follow, and
    only she could learn. What few could afford to know.

    That was the blessing of the Gods, the pride of Solar, how it felt to be touched by the sun,
    and to be afforded a luxury the world envied her for: knowledge, her biggest responsibility,
    and her longest shadow.

    The sound of hurried footsteps clambering up the stairs startled her from her thoughts.
    Joanne’s expression was a mixture of relief and irritation.

    “My lady! Have you been up here all morning?” Joanne found her and helped her off the
    stone floor. “Was his grace hiding up there with you?”

    “He isn’t in his office?” She frowned as Joanne started guiding her down the steps.

    Joanne paused beneath the curved stone entrance, her head ducking and turning as she
    looked out for the royal duke of the manor. “I had assumed he was with you…”

    Bonnie shook her head, “I haven’t seen a glimpse of him all morning.”

    Joanne nodded before, taking a look at her bare feet. “Where are your shoes?”

    By the time she stepped back into the main section of the manor after sitting on the balcony,
    an hour had passed. She assumed it had only been ten minutes since she had gotten
    dressed and left her bedroom for the laundry section. The oracle’s trance had carried her far
    from reality.

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    The halls were a mess of staff racing around, trying to pack their luggage and get their
    supplies ready as soon as possible. Joanne had informed her that the stay would last around
    three days and four nights, more than Arkaine could ever possibly handle with the Duke of
    Floris.

    Their discord was more personal than a posturing issue; she’d noticed the last time Fenrys
    had visited their manor for her oracular consultancy that Arkaine did not like the Duke of
    Floris, and Fenrys returned that feeling tenfold.

    They stopped for a moment in the hallway that led to the bedrooms. Joanne took hold of her
    hand, squeezing it gently, “My lady… Bonnie.” She looked like she had something weighing
    on her mind. “If you do find him in there, could you try to be a little more understanding? Try
    to listen to what he isn’t saying. Remember that stubbornness doesn’t always lack reason.”
    She then pushed her out of the hall, closer to the door with a smile, calling out quickly. “You’ll
    catch more flies with honey, dear.” Bonnie watched as she turned away, disappearing into
    the long stretch of walls and doors.

    It wasn’t until she almost tripped over a vine covered in thorns that she realised she had
    already walked to his door. Dark tendrils clung to the oak and crept across the stone, half
    withered, their leaves brittle where rot had begun to take hold. At her feet, fragments had
    fallen to the floor, carrying the faint scent of a burning forest that followed Arkaine around.

    She pushed open the large carved oak doors to his bedroom, not bothering to knock. If he
    truly was hiding in his room, in one of his moods, it wasn’t guaranteed that he would answer
    regardless of who was behind it.

    His room bore the same affliction. Cracks split through the stone floor, cutting across the
    gold nautical rose embedded at its centre, while dead vines traced the walls as though

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    slowly reclaiming them. A green flame moved in the hearth, casting light over the
    commissioned gilded portrait of the two of them.

    Above the mantel and overhead, the ceiling shimmered with a living constellation, stars
    charmed to mirror the true night sky, turning slowly during their courses, celestial and
    impossibly alive above a chamber touched by decay.

    She focused more on the bed, where a lump of blankets hid behind the canopy, and tiptoed
    across the cracks, “Arkaine. I see you hiding under there.” She pulled the canopy open,
    patting at where she assumed his head would be, “I know you heard me come in.”

    The lump of blankets shifted, “Nothing truly gets past you, does it?” Arkaine sighed, slipping
    out of the bed and brushing back the canopy fabric, “I was trying to get a last-minute nap in.”

    Bonnie raised an eyebrow, glancing at the man in front of her, from his long, mid-length dark
    hair, slightly mussed after hiding under his covers, to his ears that pointed straight out, then
    dipped down, the opposite of her own, which pointed towards the sky. His skin was tan but
    pale from the absence of sun in his sector.

    Ruby red almond-shaped eyes, and an almost unreadable expression in the curve of his lips,
    maybe nerves, maybe a hint of playfulness, a charming, almost deceiving gaze, but she’d
    caught him in a lie, an obvious one at that. Had she not married him, or had a weaker will,
    she would have felt inclined to play along, “A nap… after just getting dressed, yes?”

    Arkaine straightened his posture, getting ready to make what she assumed to be another
    excuse. She looked over his clothing as he smoothed the wrinkles from his formal
    blue-and-gold ensemble, a navy pinstriped vest, over a long-sleeved shirt with a high collar
    and puffy sleeves,… his biggest consistency, his gloves,

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    “Managing a Manor and a title can be stressful, my dear, I wish only to rest my eyes and
    weary soul.” He sighed with dramatic wistfulness.

    She pursed her lips; she would not laugh, she refused to laugh. No matter how humorous his
    wit, she wouldn’t let such a dumb joke slide; there was still a large elephant in the room, “I’m
    sure this sudden bout of tiredness has nothing to do with Floris and its current royal duke?”
    She didn’t need to see it to know that he bristled inwardly at her words.

    “As if I would be so easily affected, I’m merely tired, I told you. Honestly, maybe we should
    dismiss the calling and stay here, far, far away from Floris and a generous distance from
    Fenrys himself.”

    She snorted at that, “Yes, let us ignore a political calling from a land we are currently in trade
    with, see where it finds our people.”

    He swooned, placing his palm flat against his chest. “A woman with my own ideals…” he
    turned to his drawer and unclasped the black velvet case box that sat atop the oak, his
    hands hesitating as he picked up the jagged crown formed from a slab of gold. She admired
    the elegant design, sweeping symmetrical spires that curved like a wreath or circlet, but it
    lacked the gems of a regular royal headpiece; it still held the same presence and mimicked
    the sharp edges of a crown of thorns.

    He held it in his hands gently, as if he was cradling a piece of himself that he didn’t own,
    turning to her with a false grin, “I wasn’t bluffing. Why don’t we refuse the summons? Take a
    break for ourselves, I know you’ve been wanting to inspect our decaying grounds, we could
    take a tour…”

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    Just like that, the small smile on her face began to fade. Right now, she didn’t need him to
    make promises to avoid the responsibility at the end. Even though the dark forests of the
    Lunar were somewhere she’d longed to, begged to explore, she wouldn’t let him use that
    curiosity now, not after his past refusals.

    “Arkaine, as much as you know I’d love to, we have an obligation.”

    His fingers tightened around his crown, his false grin finally settling into his regular neutral
    expression.

    “Ah, yes, obligation, I forget how thrilling it is to be obligated to attend a council summons,
    obligated to perform, much like a jester in a room that I’m unwelcome in.”

    “Arkaine, you aren’t unwelcome. We were invited for a reason; there’s no need to feel
    otherwise.”

    “You act as if you aren’t aware of Duke Fenrys’ personality; he holds no respect for others,
    despite having taken the same classes in etiquette. May I also add that the lack of respect
    seems pointedly directed at me.”

    “I understand that Fenrys can be—”

    “Not can be Bonnie, darling. He is. He is utterly insufferable!”

    Bonnie sighed, folding her arms, “Arkaine, this isn’t about whether you like each other; this is
    about the council.”

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    “When it comes to him, that is never the case,” he replied. “Everything that he does is for
    some sort of show, one that you consistently seem to support.”

    “I’m not supporting him,” She said, her tone sharpening now. ”I’m asking you to do what’s
    right. Once summoned by the council, we are needed, regardless of the grudge you wish to
    hold.”

    “It is more than just a grudge!” He snapped. “Bonnie, that man is a thorn in my side and an
    even bigger pain in my ass.”

    “And you think avoiding this will fix that?”

    Arkaine hesitated, but it was too late; Bonnie’s irritation had already reached its peak.

    “To think,” She stepped back, creating a distance between them. “You would rather mope in
    here than even try to get along with Fenrys for a day. Even an hour.”

    Arkaine bristled again, shooting back, “I have tried.”

    “Clearly not hard enough.”

    He flinched, his expression tightening.

    “I’m tired of this,” she went on. “Either you get yourself and your will straight about your
    leadership, or you waste away here on your own.”

    “Oh?” He chuckled humourlessly. “So I suppose you just know it all, don’t you, Bonnie? How
    to lead, what to do. You have the formula, right?”

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    “Arkaine..” She frowned deeply. “That’s not what I said.”

    “No, you made it quite clear what you want.”

    He took a step closer, a frustrated look in his eyes, dulling the ruby tone. “Why don’t you take
    the role?” He continued, “Better yet, invite Fenrys to join you, since he’s apparently so
    layered and virtuous, so hardworking.”

    Her heart froze a little. “You can stew in your contempt all you like. I won’t be a part of it.”

    Without waiting for his reply, she turned sharply on her heel. The lace hem of her blue dress
    swished against the cracked stone floor as she crossed the room in long, determined strides.
    The green flame in the fireplace flickered across her face, highlighting the tight set of her jaw
    and the fire in her amber eyes.

    Arkaine opened his mouth, “Bonnie…” Ready to protest, but she didn’t look back. She swung
    open the heavy oak doors and stepped into the hallway, boots echoing, the door slamming
    shut behind her, her offence made clear.

    She nearly collided with Joanne as she stormed through the hall, a scowl fixed firmly across
    her features, the heat of the argument still clinging to every step.

    Joanne pushed back the brim of her hat, startled, before quickly moving to catch up with
    her. She took in Bonnie’s expression, her downcast gaze, the rigid set of her shoulders, the
    tightness in her jaw, and her own softened immediately.

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    “My Lady, did the talk not go as planned?” She asked, placing a hand on Bonnie’s shoulder.
    Bonnie let out a breath, one sharper than she had intended, her lips pressing into a thin line,
    before she forced them into something resembling a smile, one that Joanne knew all too
    well.

    “He’s being insufferably stubborn,” she muttered. “I can’t stand it at all.”

    Joanne winced in understanding, giving her shoulder a small, reassuring squeeze.

    “Then perhaps,” she said lightly, “you should head to the carriage before him. Give him a
    moment to come to his senses, I’m sure he’ll follow once he has had some time to think.”

    “Yes… You’re right. We’ve already kept everyone waiting long enough,” she paused and
    then added quietly. “I apologise.”

    She straightened up, smoothing out the front of her blue dress as she gathered herself.

    “I’ll go on ahead.”

    Joanne nodded, her tone soft, “I will be right behind you in the staff carriage. Try not to let it
    sit too heavily, My Lady.”

    Bonnie didn’t wait another second. Turning away from Joanne, she made her way down the
    rich blue carpet, through the long stretch of the corridor.

    The manor was still alive with movement. Servants crossed between halls with arms full of
    folded garments and supplies, trunks dragged across polished stone, their voices
    overlapping in hushed urgency as final preparations were made. The panic in the air had

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    settled, forming something efficient, and the scent of polished wood and linen lingered,
    mingling with the faint, ever-present scent of damp earth.

    By the time she reached the front of the manor, the large engraved front doors were open,
    showcasing the steps that led to the organised courtyard, rose buds and bluebells framing
    the sides of the steps, their colours soft, yet faintly luminescent as they glowed against the
    stone. She descended, watching the servants pile the last remnants of their luggage into the
    two carriages that stood just at the entrance.

    The carriage stood in deep violet and blue tones, its panels traced with stars and golden
    flecks. Ironwork curled along the roof in delicate loops; the glowing crescent sigil of Lunar
    pulsed softly against the door. It rested on golden-rimmed wheels, crystal lanterns swaying
    beneath the eaves, casting blue lights across the stones, though no horses stood harnessed
    to it; as they weren’t needed.

    It was charmed, guided by intent. Once inside, a destination spoken aloud was enough to
    set them in motion, the magic seeking out the mana signature of the chosen sector and
    following its trace without fault.

    The interior was warm, the blue velvet-lined seats stitched through with fine golden thread.
    She sat near the forcefield, her chin resting on her fist as she stared out into the silhouette of
    the Lunar forests, her mind focused elsewhere, her husband’s reluctance to leave, along
    with the cryptic summoning, her thoughts refused to settle.

    The door opened, and Arkaine took a seat, leaving a wide berth between them. Instead of
    pressing closer to her as usual, it felt awkward, the silence gathering uneasily in her chest.


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    The carriage shifts into motion beneath them, steady and quiet, the path ahead guided by an
    unseen pull.

    She didn’t look at him, keeping her eyes on the window beside her and occasionally ahead
    to the larger window. He adjusts the cuff of his glove, smoothing it down.

    Her jaw tightened slightly, though her expression remained composed; the tension had
    started to fill the carriage, like the fog curling around the trees’ trunks outside.

    “Well…” Arkaine shifts in his seat, as if considering something, his fingers tapping lightly
    against his knee for a moment.

    “This is certainly the most romantic departure we’ve had in a while.”

    She ignores his joke, fighting the urge to roll her eyes, leaning towards the window, lifting her
    hand just enough to offer a wave to the servants’ carriage as it passes. She knew that
    Joanne wouldn’t see it, but she needed to avoid the way Arkaine’s smile faltered— lest she
    feel too bad to ignore him properly.

    The silence this time is more unsettling, and regardless of her ire, she found herself
    watching the forest go by, the luminous crystals growing through the grass, some embedded
    in the tree trunks, glittering and sparkling like light through glass.

    As they went further down the path, she noticed that a few of the trees were tangled in vines,
    their thorns sharp and jagged, a familiar sign of rot, much like the ones that covered the
    walls and doors of Arkaine’s bedroom. An unusual sight in the normally flourishing
    landscape, she filed it to herself, pushing her thoughts to the back of her mind.

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    Time passed, and she finally caved underneath her ebbing guilt. With a soft, reluctant sigh,
    she spoke up.

    “Arkaine,” she said at last, her voice quieter, though no less firm, “I truly need you to take this
    seriously.”

    He glances over at her, his expression unreadable, but he doesn’t interrupt.

    “I understand that you may feel a certain way towards Fenrys,” she continues, turning to face
    him slightly, her knees pressing against his, “I do, I know how he can be.”

    She let her olive branch sit for a moment.

    “However, I can’t help but feel as though the situation in Floris is more dire than we think. My
    readings have been unclear.”

    Arkaine’s gaze drops briefly before shifting back to the window.

    “It is our duty as part of the council to sacrifice our comfort for the sake of our people. Our
    responsibility is to rule,” she goes on, her words steadier now, “regardless of the sector, or
    personal… feelings.”

    The silence stretches once more after her words, though the atmosphere is less brittle now.

    “I’m aware,” he answers, his voice quiet as he speaks again, “I apologise, I… was being
    quite stubborn.”

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    Bonnie sighed, and the weight that had been settling in her chest finally eased.

    “I’m aware,” She replies, a faint hint of humour slipping through, as she repeats his words
    back to him.

    After clearing the air, Bonnie couldn’t help but let a small smile creep up onto her face. She
    fidgeted slightly before speaking again.

    “Have you ever tried Floris’ native dish?”

    Arkaine glanced at her, brow lifting. “Should I be concerned?” There was a flicker of
    suspicion in his eyes.

    “The mossball,” she replied lightly. “It’s quite the dish, sticky rice and moss, with other fillings
    if you so choose.”

    She couldn’t help the quiet snicker that slipped out at the expression that followed, thinly
    veiled disgust at the thought of eating the spore-bearing plant.

    “That.. uh,” his brows knitted together. “Sounds delightful,” the sarcasm sat heavy on his
    tongue.

    The carriage carried on, their conversation drifting into something easier, until the sky
    shifted.

    Rain fell, breaking without warning, thunder rolling through the air as droplets struck the
    curved carriage surface, blurring the world beyond into streaks of grey and green, soaking

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    the mossy grass and gravel. The forest thinned as they travelled, the path widening and
    changing.

    By the time they reached the great stone archway, marking the entrance to Floris, the storm
    had settled into a steady downpour.

    The outer ring of the sector greeted them as it always had, homes woven into nature itself,
    ivy curling around wooden frames, flowers spilling from windowsills, soft lantern lights
    glowing faintly in the rain. Elves moved about their businesses, heads ducked beneath
    cloaks and shawls, the quiet hum of life continuing despite the weather.

    “Well,” Arkaine leaned back slightly, something smug tugging at his tone, “this is far less
    catastrophic than we were led to believe. I’d say our dear Fenrys may have overstretched
    things.”

    Bonnie didn’t respond. Her gaze lingered on the streets, lips pressing together as unease
    settled quietly in her chest. Something wasn’t right; she could feel it. Had Fenrys truly been
    overreacting?

    The carriage turned, and the shift was immediate; something was wrong with the streets
    ahead.

    Bodies lay scattered across the ground as though something had torn through the district
    without warning. Some had been carefully covered with white sheets, the fabric already
    soaked through by the rain, clinging to the shapes beneath. Others hadn’t been touched at
    all.

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    Figures moved between them, healers, attendants and alchemists, recognisable by the red
    armbands marked with a serpent devouring its own tail.

    The sick were worse.

    Bonnie’s breath caught sharply in her throat. Their skin had turned pale, almost grey,
    stretched thin against bone. Hair clung in damp, brittle strands. Black bile spilt from their
    mouths, thick and tar-like, trailing down their chins…

    No. Not trailing. Dripping.

    Because… Their lips, her stomach turned violently. Their lips were breaking down, the flesh
    softening, splitting and rotting, as though something beneath the surface was eating them
    alive.

    “What in the world…?”

    Her hand flew to her mouth, a sharp gasp forcing its way through her fingers as her body
    reacted before her mind could catch up. Goosebumps prickled across her skin, a crawling,
    itching sensation spreading deep in her chest, revulsion, and something far worse, absolute,
    undeniable, terror.

    Beside her, Arkaine had gone completely still, his hands trembling in his lap.

    Bonnie glanced at him, her breathing still uneven. His eyes hadn’t left the scene outside, his
    posture rigid, shoulders drawn just slightly inward. She gazed down at his clenched fists, the
    leather of his gloves creasing faintly as his fingers tightened.

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    “Arkaine?” She asked quietly, but he didn’t answer immediately, and for a moment, she didn’t
    know if he had heard her at all.

    “I see it.”

    His words came out flat, even, and she watched him, her eyes filled with concern as the
    carriage lurched; her attention on the streets once more.

    Once they finally pulled up to Fittonia Palace, the rain had picked up again.

    Theodore and Joanne rushed forward the moment their carriage stopped. Ushering both
    Arkaine and Bonnie out and into the large stony hallway of the grand palace. The plants that
    crept through the cracks in the walls and floor shuddered beneath the downpour, leaves
    trembling under the weight of the water.

    The stoned path beneath her feet was slick. Bonnie nearly lost her footing on the way inside,
    her balance slipping just enough to send a jolt of panic through her chest before her hand
    caught onto Joanne’s arm.

    “My lady— careful,” Joanne muttered, guiding her along.

    Further ahead stood an arched wooden entryway, where a brunette servant rested against
    the wall, bowing lowly in greeting.

    By the time they crossed the threshold, Bonnie was half-soaked, the sudden warmth of the
    interior doing little to banish the hollow ache of lingering terror.

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    If there is one word that she would use to describe her relationship with the Nature sector
    and its duke, it would be simple.

    Complicated.

    Fenrys had always been that way. Brilliant, undeniably so, and painfully aware of it. The kind
    of man who had never needed to soften his words, never been made to. He spoke as he
    pleased, sharp and unfiltered, carrying himself with a sort of pride that bordered on
    arrogance. A peacock of a man, pampered his entire life.

    And yet, he had always invited her, season after season, without fail. Each letter was
    delivered precisely on time.

    She had known it would happen again this year. Had known that she would eventually have
    to find a way to decline, had been trying to, in truth, though. She hadn’t quite managed it
    before Arkaine had informed her that the invitation had already been extended. But to both
    of them.

    A towel was pressed gently against her hair, pulling her from her thoughts. She flinched
    slightly at the contact before relaxing, allowing Joanne to dab away the rainwater that had
    soaked through her curls and the bodice of her dress.

    “I should have checked the weather charts,” Bonnie murmured under her breath, a quiet
    frustration slipping through as she rubbed her arms, trying to chase away the cold.
    Goosebumps still lined her skin, dotted faintly with stray spur seeds stuck in the fabric.

    Joanne and Theodore moved ahead of them, setting their belongings down and taking
    inventory of the room.

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    Bonnie stepped further inside, her gaze sweeping across the space. She had stayed
    countless times here before, always in the same guest chamber, and some of her things
    remained, forgotten from her last trip.

    A plush wooden bed sat tucked into the corner, beside the tall oak-framed windows, which
    opened onto a balcony overlooking the palace’s gardens and the rolling hillside beyond. The
    view was as lovely as she remembered from her weekends away. The room itself was cosy,
    but small.

    Much too small.

    She eyed the bed; it couldn’t possibly fit her and Arkaine together.

    A frown tugged at her lips.

    “This room…” She began, almost to herself, before turning slightly towards Arkaine. “It isn’t
    big enough.”

    Her eyes flicked back to the bed, and then to him again.

    “I’ll ask Fenrys to arrange another one.”

    Arkaine was already looking at it, and from the look in his eyes, it seemed as though they’d
    both come to the same conclusion: that this hadn’t been an oversight.

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    After several attempts to reason with the servant assigned to the guest wing, the
    brown-haired elf only shook his head, offering a polite, almost rehearsed smile.

    “I was instructed only to show you to your assigned rooms, Your majesties,” he said evenly,
    “I do not have further authority to make any further arrangements. His royal highness has
    asked that order be maintained… meaning that assigned rooming stays assigned.”

    Arkaine’s fists had clenched slightly at his sides. He exhaled slowly, forcing the tension from
    his shoulders as he turned his head just enough to meet Bonnie’s eyes for a moment. He
    gave a small, restrained shake of his head.

    The servant didn’t notice, or chose not to.

    He turned on his heel without another word, leading them away from the warmth of the guest
    wing and further down the corridor. The halls grew quieter the further they walked, the
    distant noise from the other sector leaders in their rooms, rustling and unpacking, fading into
    a dull hush, the polished stone giving way to something duller, less tended to.

    The air shifted too, losing the faint floral notes of the upper floor, replaced instead with
    something sour, bitter. The scent of manure drifted in faintly from pastures beyond the
    palace walls.

    By the time they reached the lower level, even the lantern lights had started to flicker.

    The servant stopped at last, pushing open a narrow door that sat between two support
    columns.

    “This will be your room, Your Grace.”

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    Arkaine stepped inside and stilled. The space was barely a room at all.

    Cramped, low-ceilinged, with walls that almost touched either side of the narrow bed, its
    frame both plain and unadorned, the mattress was thin enough to make itself almost unfelt
    under the sheets even at a glance. A single chair sat in the corner beside a small, worn table
    and nothing else; even the window panes had the texture and look of a fogged mirror, too
    opaque to see through.

    It was comparable, at best, to a servant’s quarters. Most accurately? A broom closet.

    Under the cloak of the evening, Arkaine found himself growing restless; the confines of the
    room pressed in on him, the low ceiling and narrow walls beginning to suffocate him, rather
    than merely being inconvenient. The air was stale and heavy, as if the space had not been
    opened for days, perhaps longer. Even the faint glow from the lantern outside struggled to
    reach through the fogged glass, leaving the corners of the room in a dull, stagnant gloom of
    faint orange.

    He needed an excuse to leave; he needed to leave as soon as possible, more than that, he
    needed to speak to Bonnie. The longer he remained here, the more the room assignment
    gnawed at him; the oversight was definitely deliberate. An insult thinly veiled behind falsities.

    He had a title, the same as the rest of them, yet…

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    The unspoken thought hung heavily on his chest, something bitter curling at its edges. He
    dragged a hand down the front of his coat as though he could smooth the feeling away. It
    lingered regardless, quiet and persistent.

    The room offered no reprieve. No distractions. Only the fraying presence of his own
    thoughts, circling back, again and again, to the same place.

    The streets, grey skin stretched thin, bile blackened mouths, rot.

    He stared down at his gloved hands, looking away before the images could venture deeper.

    The door opened with careful precision, the handle guided silently beneath his palm as he
    slipped into the corridor beyond, easing it shut with equal care.

    The cold settled first, seeping through the stone beneath his feet and lingering in the air
    around him like it had a weight to it. It pressed in quietly, dulling the warmth that should have
    lived within the palace walls. Darkness followed close behind it, stretching long through the
    halls, pooling in the corners that the lanterns refused to reach.

    The air felt thinner here. It carried the faint scent of damp stone and something green and
    earthy, clinging to the palace’s wooden structure. The distant sound of rain filtered through
    the walls, soft at first, then sharper when the wind shifted, tapping faintly against the large
    arched windows.

    His steps were measured, quiet. His hands brushed lightly along the stone wall as he
    walked, grounding himself in something solid.

    He shouldn’t be out here.

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    But the room they gave to him, that narrow, suffocating space, still clung to him like a second
    skin. It had not been a mistake, he knew that much. Fenrys had always been precise,
    malicious.

    And this… this was deliberate.

    His jaw tightened slightly at the thought, his teeth grinding together, though the irritation that
    had come so easily earlier that day had dulled into something quieter, a little more internal.
    The image of the streets outside flickered uninvited to the front of his mind, bodies lined
    under rain-soaked sheets, the sick slumped where they could no longer stand.

    He exhaled silently. This was not about Fenrys, not entirely.

    Bonnie had been right; something was wrong with Floris. That much was clear now, far
    clearer than it had been when they first crossed into the sector.

    His pace slowed slightly as the corridor opened ahead. The palace shifted here, the
    structure changing the further he moved from the lower wing; the walls were less adorned,
    narrower, the creeping greenery that had decorated the upper halls thinning into sparse,
    brittle strands that clung weakly to the stone. Decaying vines that reminded him of his own
    bedroom back in Lunar.

    The lanterns here burned lower, their light dim and unsteady. He frowned faintly; the signs
    he had been seeing were odd. Floris was not a place that struggled to grow; agriculture was
    traded worldwide from their one thousand-acre farms, luxurious greenhouses and elusive
    wild groves hidden beyond the palace borders, where medicinal flora and sacred species

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    were said to thrive and flourish. Growth was the lifeblood of the sector, woven into its
    economy, its magic and even its pride.

    For vines to wither against stone, for leaves to crisp and cling in brittle strands where they
    should have flourished, it did not feel natural. Arkaine’s gaze lingered on the dying tendrils a
    moment longer, unease turning in his stomach.

    Then, he heard voices.

    Low at first, almost indistinguishable from the hush of the storm outside, as though the
    palace itself was murmuring through its walls. He stilled, staring down at his shadow across
    the floor, the moonlight stretching it long and warped over the stone.

    The sound came again, clearer this time, slipping down the corridor in fragments. Not
    servants, not the idle talk of guards changing posts. There was an urgency to it, a stammer
    that he could feel in his own throat.

    Arkaine moved without thinking, each step softened against stone. He stopped at the turn
    where the corridor bent into a darker wing, where a small door sat slightly ajar. The voices
    gathered there.

    “…it has worsened…”

    “…the bile is spreading to the lungs…”

    “…if the lower districts aren’t quarantined—”

    Alchemists.

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    He knew the tone before he saw the red bands on their sleeves, clinical, detached. He
    edged closer to the corner, his shoulder brushing against the stone, and looked into the
    room.

    Two figures stood beneath a lantern, hunched over, cloaks covering the backs of their
    heads, speaking in hushed tones over parchment. Between them sat a tray of instruments
    that gleamed dully in the low light. Glass vials and silver tools stained dark at the tips.

    Before them stood a slender, lithe figure, dressed in dark blue shorts, an electric blue tunic,
    and a darker overcoat, its tails falling just below the mid-length of his boots; the peacock sigil
    of his family was worked through every layer of his clothing. A large braid of peacock plumes
    draped over one shoulder, his posture tense as he received the alchemist’s warnings. His
    ears pointed and thinned at the tips. Beneath the lanterns’ glow, his visible green eye caught
    sharply, like cut grass, his green hair hidden in the shadows. Yet, what made Arkaine bristle
    was the bandana bound across his brow, concealing the all-seeing third eye of judgment.

    Then, Fenrys’ visible eye shifted, slow and deliberate, fixed on the door, locking onto the
    darkness where Arkaine hid.